me and my friend Oscar have been working on a slideshow called Cuphead and it is a video game about i have embedded the slide today it is work in progress but we will add more to it
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Tuesday, April 13, 2021
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Hi Eli, You did a really good job on this post, you and your friends must've spent a lot of time creating the slideshow. I really enjoyed how you put a lot of detail in your writing just maybe next time try to fit everything on the slide because on the story part it was kind of bunched up. Overall you did really good on this post and I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaidyn for the comment I will keep working on it when i can
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